Changeset 134582 for trunk/doc-new


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Timestamp:
Mar 31, 2015, 12:38:40 AM (4 years ago)
Author:
ionic@…
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doc-new/guide/xml: grammar fixes: correctly use e.g. instead of i.e. when necessary, use a trailing comma.

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trunk/doc-new/guide/xml
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  • trunk/doc-new/guide/xml/internals.xml

    r126075 r134582  
    210210            <listitem>
    211211              <para><code>mportexec:</code> Given a port handle, executes a
    212               target (i.e. install).</para>
     212              target (e.g., install).</para>
    213213            </listitem>
    214214
  • trunk/doc-new/guide/xml/portfile-keywords.xml

    r126075 r134582  
    3838        and the like, names should contain only alphanumeric characters,
    3939        underscores, dashes or dots. For projects whose proper names contain
    40         <quote>+</quote> characters, change these to <quote>x</quote> (i.e.
     40        <quote>+</quote> characters, change these to <quote>x</quote> (e.g.,
    4141        <quote>libstdc++</quote> becomes <quote>libstdcxx</quote>).</para>
    4242
     
    123123
    124124          <listitem>
    125             <para>For addresses in other domains, e.g.
     125            <para>For addresses in other domains, e.g.,
    126126            <email>account@example.org</email>, use the convention
    127127            example.org:account to specify the address.</para>
  • trunk/doc-new/guide/xml/portfile-variables.xml

    r105189 r134582  
    134134
    135135      <listitem>
    136         <para>The underlying operating system platform (i.e.
     136        <para>The underlying operating system platform (e.g.,
    137137        <quote>darwin</quote> on OS X, <quote>freebsd</quote>,
    138138        etc.).</para>
     
    153153
    154154      <listitem>
    155         <para>The version number of the host operating system (i.e.
     155        <para>The version number of the host operating system (e.g.,
    156156        <quote>12.3.0</quote> for Darwin 12.3.0 a.k.a. OS X 10.8.3).</para>
    157157      </listitem>
     
    171171
    172172      <listitem>
    173         <para>The major version number of the host operating system (i.e.
     173        <para>The major version number of the host operating system (e.g.,
    174174        <quote>12</quote> for Darwin 12.x).</para>
    175175      </listitem>
  • trunk/doc-new/guide/xml/portfile-variants.xml

    r126075 r134582  
    202202    <note>
    203203      <para>Though a combination of OS version and hardware platform may be
    204       specified in a single platform statement (i.e. darwin 8 i386), it is not
     204      specified in a single platform statement (e.g., darwin 8 i386), it is not
    205205      possible to specify a range of platforms with a single statement. For
    206206      example, to select Darwin versions 9 and 10 while excluding all others,
  • trunk/doc-new/guide/xml/portfiledev.xml

    r134184 r134582  
    11781178     
    11791179      <para>Thus the buildbot helps to keep MacPorts consistent on various
    1180       OSX versions, i.e. a maintainer does not need access to these versions anymore in
     1180      OSX versions, i.e., a maintainer does not need access to these versions anymore in
    11811181      order to assure that the port(s) maintained build without problems. Currently only
    11821182      the default port variants will be build and kept.</para>
  • trunk/doc-new/guide/xml/portgroup-python.xml

    r105189 r134582  
    5858
    5959        <listitem>
    60           <para>For modules (i.e. name starts with <quote>py-</quote>), this sets the
     60          <para>For modules (i.e., name starts with <quote>py-</quote>), this sets the
    6161          subport that will be installed if the user asks to install <quote>py-foo</quote>
    62           rather than e.g. <quote>py26-foo</quote> or <quote>py27-foo</quote>. If not explicitly set, a
     62          rather than, e.g., <quote>py26-foo</quote> or <quote>py27-foo</quote>. If not explicitly set, a
    6363          reasonable default is chosen from the list in <code>python.versions</code>.</para>
    64           <para>For apps (i.e. name does not start with <quote>py-</quote>), this chooses
     64          <para>For apps (i.e., name does not start with <quote>py-</quote>), this chooses
    6565          which version of python to use, and must be set. It can be changed
    6666          in variants if desired.</para>
     
    188188
    189189        <listitem>
    190           <para>The Python dynamic library path, i.e.
     190          <para>The Python dynamic library path, i.e.,
    191191          <filename>${python.prefix}/Python</filename> (framework builds) or
    192192          <filename>${prefix}/lib/libpython2.4.dylib</filename> (python24).</para>
     
    198198
    199199        <listitem>
    200           <para>The path to python's lib directory, i.e.
     200          <para>The path to python's lib directory, i.e.,
    201201          <filename>${python.prefix}/lib/python${python.branch}</filename>.</para>
    202202        </listitem>
  • trunk/doc-new/guide/xml/project.xml

    r134581 r134582  
    281281          development of the ticket. Multiple email addresses should be
    282282          separated with a comma and a space
    283           (i.e. <literal>you@example.org, maintainer@macports.org</literal>).</para>
     283          (e.g., <literal>you@example.org, maintainer@macports.org</literal>).</para>
    284284         
    285285          <para>When reporting port-related tickets, make sure you add the
     
    877877    <itemizedlist>
    878878        <listitem>
    879           <para>approving new project members (i.e. granting commit
     879          <para>approving new project members (i.e., granting commit
    880880          rights);</para>
    881881        </listitem>
  • trunk/doc-new/guide/xml/using.xml

    r134566 r134582  
    3434Upgrade MacPorts itself and run the sync target
    3535
    36 --nosync   Do not run the sync target, i.e. do not update the ports tree.
     36--nosync   Do not run the sync target, i.e., do not update the ports tree.
    3737           Only checks for (and installs, if available) new versions of
    3838           MacPorts.</screen>
     
    425425                    <term><option>--no-build</option></term>
    426426                    <listitem>
    427                         <para>Exclude dependencies only required at build time, i.e. fetch, extract, and build
     427                        <para>Exclude dependencies only required at build time, i.e., fetch, extract, and build
    428428                            dependencies.</para>
    429429                    </listitem>
     
    875875                        <para>If the installed variants do not match those requested, upgrade (and change variants) even
    876876                            if the port is not outdated. You can use this to switch the variant selection on an
    877                             installed port, e.g. using</para>
     877                            installed port, e.g., using</para>
    878878
    879879                        <programlisting><prompt>$ </prompt><userinput>sudo port upgrade --enforce-variants apache2 -preforkmpm +workermpm</userinput></programlisting>
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