Changeset 31909 for trunk/doc-new


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Timestamp:
Dec 11, 2007, 8:05:07 PM (12 years ago)
Author:
markd@…
Message:

Fix grammer and typos in epoch material from my last commit.

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  • trunk/doc-new/guide/xml/portfile-global-keywords.7.xml

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    9292            <para>If an epoch is used it must be incremented for each
    9393            subsequent port update; it must never be decreased or reset to
    94             zero, because this would cause port version comparisons to fail to
    95             see when ports are out of date.</para>
     94            zero, because this would always cause a port version comparison to
     95            be incorrect after a port upgrade.</para>
    9696          </note>
    9797
    98           <para>An epoch will not be needed for most ports, and good use of a
    99           port's version can even make using an epoch unneccesary even for
     98          <para>An epoch is not be needed for most ports, and good use of a
     99          port's version can make using an epoch unneccesary even for
    100100          application distributions without official version numbers. For
    101           example, if a application version 1.5 is superceded by a snapshot
     101          example, if an application version 1.5 is superceded by a snapshot
    102102          release 20081022, the new release could be given version number
    103103          1.5.20081022, rather than 20081022, so the newer release will have a
    104           numericaly greater value. </para>
     104          numericaly greater value.</para>
    105105        </listitem>
    106106      </varlistentry>
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